Utopia : The Land of My Soul

Thursday, June 28, 2007

TOKENS OF LOVE LOST














A word that slings the heart like an arrow shot with vengeance,
A feline look cast archly as if it could incise the heart.
A frigid shoulder, like Lucifer’s when he was indicted, turned away.
The body grown starkly nonchalant, losing its jewelries – warmth and amicability.
And……… an incomplete orb
Does Heaven hear?
Even a Phoenix is bored!
One step, two, three…..a complete cycle.
Yes, you have just yourself to hear out what the “you” says.
Do you have company?
Asking or confirming?

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posted by Amrita at 6:57 pm

6 Comments:

what do u mean by all this? Didn't get u...But I liked the one you have written in which soul of a mother blesses his son from heaven.

10:30 pm  

hmm u hav come a long way from ur earlier writings..i came here after a looong time

4:56 pm  

kewl

3:26 am  

lovely words...!

2:48 pm  

hey
didnt get much of your latest creation.
BTW where are you nowadays...
ne new post :)

2:21 pm  

a very good command over english u have...and dis is a nice place..so are the poems...!

4:07 pm  

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